Monday, 14 April 2014

My Writing

WALT-I can elaborate my ideas to include description of characters,settings and important events.

Ruby was slightly trembling,she was scared.Her eyes were wide with fright as she peered through the crack in the door."Mum,Dad!"she said faintly,because she,Ruby Redfort was well and truly scared!

I know I can do this because I have stated how the character is feeling,the action and what the character said/would say during this situation.I have also asked for feedback.

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